Naruto Chapter 8: Shinju Jinjuuriki

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Hagoromo Otsutsuki wrote:

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Lol nah its ok want me to stop with this chapter then?

Hagoromo Otsutsuki wrote:

Lol nah its ok want me to stop with this chapter then?

no keep going

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Hagoromo Otsutsuki wrote:

Hagoromo: "I know your thinking also......"
Yoshirou: "hm.....your too young."
Hagoromo: "So?......i mean we are processors of our family."
Yoshirou: "Thats all fine and dandy but what use would the shinju be to us?"
Hagoromo: "We can stop anyone from harming our villages......noone will and cant beat us with the shinju as our hosts."
Yoshirou: "............*sighs* the risk is to great the shinju would rip your mind apart if you don't have the goal you want "
Hagoromo: "SO? its worth it.....the rinnegan is the symbol of peace or destruction other shinobi are losing that grip yoshirou look at your village"
Yoshirou: ".....b-.....i know.....it wasn't my fault i wasnt-"
Hagoromo: "Caring?......"
Yoshirou: *Yoshirou jumped head on* "It wasnt like that and you know it."
Hagoromo: "I know but we both just left our villages unprotected to start a mini war with weak shinobi."
Yoshirou: "Dont be fooled some can bare the sharingan eyes"
Hagoromo: "tch we are fare more powerful then the sharingan eyes the rinnegan was the true first most powerful eyes since the juubi"
Yoshirou: "But your grandbother my ancestor  Kaguya.......she beared the byakugan"
Hagoromo: "......Grandmother was powerful only with the shinju's chakra."
Yoshirou: "Then you must have forgotten when the chakra consumed her?"
Hagoromo: "Seriously think we could be taken over by that thing?"
Yoshirou: ".......We don't know that's why we should try it!"
Hagoromo: "WE ARE THE STRONGEST USERS AROUND!"
Yoshirou: "I KNOW!"
Hagoromo: "Then why don't you want to make this world peaceful?"
Yoshirou: "I do but that takes time!" and i will make it my way you have your fathers blood but i have his son's curse of hate
Hagoromo: gasp's you have indara's curse well we are indeed  different but "TIME!? we dont have that much before more villages finds us!"
Yoshirou: "You are the God of the uzumaki cousin and you must know the bounds of true power."like i do with the bond of hate i will never fore give the fuma or any other villager other then yours
Hagoromo: "I AM TRUE POWER! i have been training since i was a mere 3 year old."
Yoshirou: "................"
Hagoromo: ".............."
Yoshirou: "Then why not show that power?......and way just wait"
Hagoromo: "waiting isn't a goal i wanna do....i wanna take action straight on!"
Yoshirou: "...........such words but can you do that without the shinju?"
Hagoromo: "Can you fight without being born inside the clan?......"
Yoshirou: "I have no idea........"
Hagoromo: "Then when i am older we will see cousin.....we will see...."
Yoshirou: "Hagoromo i am the son of your father's son!"
Hagoromo: "..........Yes we are cousins by blood....."but i also feel your anger and hatred building up  
Yoshirou: "then follow the path on which waiting helps"
Hagoromo: "And? i am the sage of the six paths son......"
NEXT CHAPTER! "I am my fathers son!"

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